石磊鹏大作文

1 审题事项

审题时，题目读三遍，否则不动笔，需要关注的为英文指令 + 图画信息（环境、相关人、物、写作）+ 文字说明。将图画信息和文字说明相结合来避免跑题。

首句引入图画
- These are two simple but enlightening/though-provoking/meaningful drawings/pictures/cartoons（漫画）/chat（图表）；
- These two simple but enlightening drawings are for the purpose of illustrating/demonstrating parents' excessive protection for their children.
用六种语法来描述图画：图画描述：环境 + 人/物 + 动作 + 文字
- in/Inside （介词短语表环境）
  - Inside a huge warm house,
- there be 引出相关的人/物
  - there is a little and delicate（精致的） flower
- ving 表示伴随动作
  - growing vigorously(茁壮的) and blossoming
- with+n+ving/ved/介词/形容词短语表示身上或周围事务
  - with the house protecting it from the outside severe weather.
- Although 引导让步状语从句表示反差
  - Although it seems quite healthy and strong in the house, this plant withers(v.枯萎) quickly after it is put in the rain.
  - with its petals(花瓣) falling in the wind.
- 被动 + 定语从句表示文字说明
  - Finally, several Chinese characters can be noticed, which say/read that flowers in the greenhouse cannot stand withstand the wind and rain.

先想想中文，然后结合前面的六种语法来写。

常用于首句引出下文：
- 产生这一现象至少有以下三点原因：There are at least three causes being responsible for that……
- 这张图描述了这样一种社会现象：This graph has demonstrated a current social phenomenon thar……

分点论述

连接词
- 首先：First and foremost ; To begin with ; First of all;
- 其次：Besides ; Furthermore ; Next ; Meanwhile ; In addition;
- 最后：Last but not least ; Finally ; however
推荐句型
- not only …… but also …… 倒装句型
  - 将 not only 提到句首，后加助动词 do/does/did，后可以直接加简单句或从句，but also 后的内容不变。
  - e.g. Not only can parents reading plentiful books develop children's learning interest, but also improve their own knowledge base.
- the evidence of …… ,manifests that ……
- 定语从句